Re: My Feet by smallsun |
30-Oct-02/7:07 AM |
where can i get a pair of protective feet like that, and why didn't you lend them to your uncle?
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Re: Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/7:42 AM |
why must she cost so damn much?
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Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones |
30-Oct-02/7:50 AM |
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
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Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~ |
4-Nov-02/7:03 AM |
who stood in effigy for him? why not do more with this? it's amusing...
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Re: ITS SO HARD by adrenalize |
4-Nov-02/7:06 AM |
fix the typos. we all know it is hard to let someone go. show us why.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.
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Re: cool hand luke by royalflesh |
4-Nov-02/7:27 AM |
my favorite line:
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.
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Re: crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot |
4-Nov-02/7:36 AM |
why put the 'not for the weak' disclaimer there if you are not going to fulfill it? there is nothing shocking here.
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Re: St. Andrews University Marxist Society by Nicholas Jones |
4-Nov-02/8:14 AM |
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Re: arise by daniella |
4-Nov-02/8:39 AM |
finally! a poem that both tempts and delivers! nice effort.
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Re: Three pointed star by INTRANSIT |
4-Nov-02/8:40 AM |
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Re: Cold Set by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/8:41 AM |
would like it better if it read: 'as behind iced farts whores enraged', but that's just me...
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Re: Stranger by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/8:42 AM |
why don't you introduce yourself to her?
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Re: fading by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/8:43 AM |
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"
arg.
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Re: untitled by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/8:45 AM |
that's not what i dreamed of a a youth,but whatever.
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Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird |
4-Nov-02/8:53 AM |
is self-consumption your passion? have a glass of milk, and BTW chocolate is yummy on most body parts.
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Re: Alien by Mutant_X |
4-Nov-02/11:19 AM |
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.
you don't.
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Re: Bedside Angel by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/11:20 AM |
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Re: Untitled by vulcan |
4-Nov-02/11:23 AM |
these are disjointed images splattered about, with a hint cohesiveness to them. but not enough, and not pleasantly so. finish the thought. weave it together.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Nov-02/11:25 AM |
pretty pretty words. what's behind them? have a 3 until you put some flesh on these bones. this did not satisfy.
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Re: Down Again by Birdman42s |
4-Nov-02/11:26 AM |
prescription drugs can solve this for you, birdman
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