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Re: My Feet by smallsun 30-Oct-02/7:07 AM
where can i get a pair of protective feet like that, and why didn't you lend them to your uncle?
Re: Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar 30-Oct-02/7:42 AM
why must she cost so damn much?
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30-Oct-02/7:50 AM
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~ 4-Nov-02/7:03 AM
who stood in effigy for him? why not do more with this? it's amusing...
Re: ITS SO HARD by adrenalize 4-Nov-02/7:06 AM
fix the typos. we all know it is hard to let someone go. show us why.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.
Re: cool hand luke by royalflesh 4-Nov-02/7:27 AM
my favorite line:
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.
Re: crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 4-Nov-02/7:36 AM
why put the 'not for the weak' disclaimer there if you are not going to fulfill it? there is nothing shocking here.
Re: St. Andrews University Marxist Society by Nicholas Jones 4-Nov-02/8:14 AM
true.
Re: arise by daniella 4-Nov-02/8:39 AM
finally! a poem that both tempts and delivers! nice effort.
Re: Three pointed star by INTRANSIT 4-Nov-02/8:40 AM
explain, please?
Re: Cold Set by feathers68 4-Nov-02/8:41 AM
would like it better if it read: 'as behind iced farts whores enraged', but that's just me...
Re: Stranger by feathers68 4-Nov-02/8:42 AM
why don't you introduce yourself to her?
Re: fading by PunchMeInTheFace 4-Nov-02/8:43 AM
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"

arg.
Re: untitled by PunchMeInTheFace 4-Nov-02/8:45 AM
that's not what i dreamed of a a youth,but whatever.
Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird 4-Nov-02/8:53 AM
is self-consumption your passion? have a glass of milk, and BTW chocolate is yummy on most body parts.
Re: Alien by Mutant_X 4-Nov-02/11:19 AM
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.

you don't.
Re: Bedside Angel by feathers68 4-Nov-02/11:20 AM
this is just awful.
Re: Untitled by vulcan 4-Nov-02/11:23 AM
these are disjointed images splattered about, with a hint cohesiveness to them. but not enough, and not pleasantly so. finish the thought. weave it together.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Nov-02/11:25 AM
pretty pretty words. what's behind them? have a 3 until you put some flesh on these bones. this did not satisfy.
Re: Down Again by Birdman42s 4-Nov-02/11:26 AM
prescription drugs can solve this for you, birdman


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