Re: pee haiku by New Life Drug |
14-May-03/5:37 AM |
Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
14-May-03/5:49 AM |
This is moving, a traditional sabi Haiku; no need for caps to begin second and third lines. Wonderful writing!
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14-May-03/5:51 AM |
Haiku, nontraditional,nor is it in form of expression for wabi, sabi, karumi or aware. Nice try, though.
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Re: Anouk by daniella |
14-May-03/6:43 AM |
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Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
18-May-03/10:06 AM |
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Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
18-May-03/10:08 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-May-03/10:10 AM |
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Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
18-May-03/10:18 AM |
Right on! I enjoyed this profound explanation of the "pimple poem."
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Re: The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT |
18-May-03/10:20 AM |
Now, this one made me think!
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-May-03/10:23 AM |
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Re: Mississipi Murder by scitz |
18-May-03/10:25 AM |
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Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
18-May-03/10:27 AM |
I remember it well. Thanx for writing!
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regarding some deleted poem... |
18-May-03/10:28 AM |
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Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
18-May-03/10:29 AM |
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Re: Karma by blankel |
18-May-03/10:32 AM |
Aptly put! And it rhymes, too. Right on!
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Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
18-May-03/10:34 AM |
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Re: Coffle by Wulf |
18-May-03/10:36 AM |
I'm confused. Why write a short for Poemranker critique? I do identify with it, though.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
24-May-03/5:57 PM |
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Re: Fingers 'Round My Heart by Wulf |
24-May-03/6:37 PM |
It's really beautifully poignant, Wulf.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
24-May-03/6:38 PM |
It is thought-provoking, Vi.
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