on Anouk by daniella
14 May 2003, 6:43 AM
Just lovely.
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 10:10 AM
Interesting.
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 10:23 AM
Ahem.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 5:57 PM
OK!
on Fingers 'Round My Heart by Wulf
24 May 2003, 6:37 PM
It's really beautifully poignant, Wulf.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 6:38 PM
It is thought-provoking, Vi.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
18 May 2003, 10:06 AM
Lovely sentiment
on Summer by MaliqaTara
18 May 2003, 10:08 AM
Oh! Aptly expressed.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
18 May 2003, 10:18 AM
Right on! I enjoyed this profound explanation of the "pimple poem."
on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT
18 May 2003, 10:20 AM
Now, this one made me think!
on Mississipi Murder by scitz
18 May 2003, 10:25 AM
Sad memories...
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
18 May 2003, 10:27 AM
I remember it well. Thanx for writing!
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 10:28 AM
Yes.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
18 May 2003, 10:29 AM
'Tis true.
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
18 May 2003, 10:34 AM
OOOOOK!
on pee haiku by New Life Drug
14 May 2003, 5:37 AM
Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.
on some deleted poem
14 May 2003, 5:49 AM
This is moving, a traditional sabi Haiku; no need for caps to begin second and third lines. Wonderful writing!
on some deleted poem
14 May 2003, 5:51 AM
Haiku, nontraditional,nor is it in form of expression for wabi, sabi, karumi or aware. Nice try, though.