on Karma by blankel
12 Apr 2003, 9:29 PM
PPPPPPPPPPPPPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRICK!
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 11:12 PM
Is this about that beer add where the dude stick this girl's bag in the rubbish recepticle? I hate that add. Plus she's ugly.
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 11:18 PM
Don't you have homework you should be doing?? A pre-algebra test to study for??
on some deleted poem
12 Apr 2003, 9:28 PM
San Fransisco. Where the flowers bloom in spring.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2003, 2:53 PM
I have TATU's agent on the horn.
on hehehe by Freethinker1602
12 Apr 2003, 9:29 PM
hella lot that's hew motch
on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
12 Apr 2003, 9:30 PM
ha
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 11:06 PM
Why haiku oh you don't know. Pulling the strings on your hooded sweatshirt, pushing you out your front door, shutting it, kicking your dog, stealing loose change and valuables, opening your door, kicking you back inside, watching your dog bite you, closing the door. ta dah.
on You Left Me by Cali
10 Apr 2003, 11:14 PM
I don't want to start any blasphemous rumours but it seems that god's got a wholesome and observant sense of humour.
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 11:13 PM
show more tell less, but altogether better than the last 20 poems I just read.
on Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik
10 Apr 2003, 11:11 PM
interesting. tired ending, do something interesting. break it up or shorten it and stick it all together. Think.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
10 Apr 2003, 11:10 PM
Shove lightbulbs up your ass
And then punch yourself in the abdoment
For eternity.
And then punch yourself in the abdoment
For eternity.
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
10 Apr 2003, 11:20 PM
this is worse than fucking chopsticks
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
10 Apr 2003, 11:09 PM
Prison rape isn't funny, despite what american mass media may have you believe. www.spr.org.
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
10 Apr 2003, 11:16 PM
wow a poem inspired by a movie inspired by a war inspired by real events. Replace last line with "BORN..IN THE USA!!! (x10)".
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
10 Apr 2003, 11:08 PM
too long
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 11:02 PM
""""
on You Left Me by Cali
10 Apr 2003, 11:07 PM
Lower your standards and settle for what you can get.