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10-Apr-03/11:02 PM |
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10-Apr-03/11:06 PM |
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Why haiku oh you don't know. Pulling the strings on your hooded sweatshirt, pushing you out your front door, shutting it, kicking your dog, stealing loose change and valuables, opening your door, kicking you back inside, watching your dog bite you, closing the door. ta dah.
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| Re: You Left Me by Cali |
10-Apr-03/11:07 PM |
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Lower your standards and settle for what you can get.
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
10-Apr-03/11:08 PM |
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
10-Apr-03/11:09 PM |
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Prison rape isn't funny, despite what american mass media may have you believe. www.spr.org.
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| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
10-Apr-03/11:10 PM |
Shove lightbulbs up your ass
And then punch yourself in the abdoment
For eternity.
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| Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik |
10-Apr-03/11:11 PM |
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interesting. tired ending, do something interesting. break it up or shorten it and stick it all together. Think.
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10-Apr-03/11:12 PM |
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Is this about that beer add where the dude stick this girl's bag in the rubbish recepticle? I hate that add. Plus she's ugly.
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10-Apr-03/11:13 PM |
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show more tell less, but altogether better than the last 20 poems I just read.
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| Re: You Left Me by Cali |
10-Apr-03/11:14 PM |
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I don't want to start any blasphemous rumours but it seems that god's got a wholesome and observant sense of humour.
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| Re: Coffle by Wulf |
10-Apr-03/11:15 PM |
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why did the black kid cry when he had diahrehaa?>? He thot he was melting lol asl. 10;
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| Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
10-Apr-03/11:16 PM |
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wow a poem inspired by a movie inspired by a war inspired by real events. Replace last line with "BORN..IN THE USA!!! (x10)".
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10-Apr-03/11:18 PM |
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Don't you have homework you should be doing?? A pre-algebra test to study for??
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| Re: To Lesley by Bahookie |
10-Apr-03/11:19 PM |
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lesly's a fga na,e lol als
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| Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe |
10-Apr-03/11:20 PM |
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this is worse than fucking chopsticks
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12-Apr-03/9:28 PM |
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San Fransisco. Where the flowers bloom in spring.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
12-Apr-03/9:29 PM |
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PPPPPPPPPPPPPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRICK!
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| Re: hehehe by Freethinker1602 |
12-Apr-03/9:29 PM |
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hella lot that's hew motch
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| Re: The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
12-Apr-03/9:30 PM |
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17-Aug-03/2:53 PM |
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I have TATU's agent on the horn.
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