Re: The Flame by Fire_is_cool	19-Apr-04/11:03 AM
This is really boring, but at least it wasn't long.
Re: Quintus: Lesson 1 by richa	22-Apr-04/7:33 AM
nice. are there going to be more lessons or is this a one time thing?
Re: Biography I (1996) by halofriendly	22-Apr-04/7:36 AM
the beginning is what the rest of this should be like.
Re: The Negro by Everyone	22-Apr-04/7:40 AM
nice, but I do have a couple problems. Some of the rhymes sound forced and the ending is nothing special. however, that jolting sensation? Where you smoothly rhyme two long lines, then go abruptly short? Don't change that.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-04/7:47 AM
Sweet. Pretty.
Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac	22-Apr-04/7:54 AM
Zodiac, this is so weird. When did you write this? April 21, huh? I guess it must have been shortly before my Tribute To Edgar Allen Poe...that's a pretty fucking weird coincidence.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-04/12:07 PM
alright...who gave this a 10?
Re: Of Gods & Beast In Villanelle by Bachus	27-Apr-04/11:02 AM
Oh yes. That's very good.
Re: Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/11:16 AM
Yes, oblivion becomes me is awful, but there are some good parts, especially your tendency toward internal rhyme.
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold	21-May-04/11:19 AM
I side with zodiac. Although I'm not known for understandable poetry, this is beyond even me.
Re: In Love as in Love by Everyone	27-May-04/7:32 AM
Your poems are always the poster child of anti-climax.
Re: loneliness untold by francis nor capule	27-May-04/7:39 AM
Have you all lost your minds? This is not a good poem. A bore. I could barely make it through.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-May-04/7:42 AM
The only thing that I would like to see changed is, "Roasting pork and peppers' bite, Brick oven smoke pours, choking night." Somehow the second line disrupts the flow.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-04/12:16 PM
ummm...this isn't really a sonnet. Aren't they usually written in iambic pentameter?
Re: Turbulence by horus8	18-Oct-04/12:22 PM
The first half of this really got me going...and then that kind of cop-out at the end....
Re: Another Endless Night by MacFrantic	18-Oct-04/12:27 PM
Did you write this with syllables in mind? I can't make up my mind.
Re: Zipmark'd by fevriere	18-Oct-04/12:40 PM
its not cute at all. please, put it all into normal context and it will be rated much higher.
Re: Me helping Me by ThoughtfulSoul	18-Oct-04/12:43 PM
you ripped this page right out of your diary didn't you
Re: To Leave a Trace by Dovina	18-Oct-04/12:50 PM
Getting back to the poem...I will have to agree that this is a little bland. But it's not an insult, just criticism, so don't take it the worng way.
Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy	2-Nov-04/11:13 AM
I am so sick of this site. Fine, if I get a 2 I won't complain for myself, but stop giving dribbling shit like this 10s.