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Zipmark'd (Free verse) by fevriere
Clever you, whiskeysour wakeling,
clever your hands slip
-pery on the animal of you;
on the hip sidewalk.
You flush the lavendar veins of
your thighs and generally let
your inside take pride in bringing to life
your corps.
Crumbs;
all that went on at that
Party lasnight
was your body and your insides
Raging Waking;
then the drink put you to bed, so
you found your self allclothed, unhid;
you let your self dangle
over the edge of the bed
- extremities growing cold.
You were delighted to find that Lust had disappeared overnight
and steamed-up windows had come clear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4939
Posted: October 17, 2004 10:51 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2004 5:39 AM PDT
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