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Zipmark'd (Free verse) by fevriere

Clever you, whiskeysour wakeling, clever your hands slip -pery on the animal of you; on the hip sidewalk. You flush the lavendar veins of your thighs and generally let your inside take pride in bringing to life your corps. Crumbs; all that went on at that Party lasnight was your body and your insides Raging Waking; then the drink put you to bed, so you found your self allclothed, unhid; you let your self dangle over the edge of the bed - extremities growing cold. You were delighted to find that Lust had disappeared overnight and steamed-up windows had come clear.

Fear of Garbage 18-Oct-04/12:40 PM
its not cute at all. please, put it all into normal context and it will be rated much higher.




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