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20 most recent comments by GekoHawaii
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Re: amanda by famenglory 27-Jan-03/9:03 PM
It's my goal to be able to write like you. I think I'll send this to my ex amanda.
Re: alms by famenglory 27-Jan-03/9:10 PM
Wow. Again I'm impressed. Very deep and true. Like in a higher level hippy spiritual kind of way.
Re: All Alone Again by Spindle 7-Feb-03/6:28 AM
Overall nice job. It just needs a little tweaking in the words to help it flow a little better.
Re: Rain by famenglory 23-Mar-03/6:17 PM
So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...
Re: mirror by famenglory 23-Mar-03/6:20 PM
Wow...very powerful
Re: At Least I Love You by Luv2write 23-Mar-03/6:26 PM
Thanks for the inspiring words. I have friends that tell me then same, though I still don't believe it.
Re: My friend by Luv2write 23-Mar-03/6:30 PM
Oo...Nice twist, good rhyme scheme, overall good poetry. The meter needs a little work but that is something that can be easily fixed.
Re: Waiting by Luv2write 23-Mar-03/6:33 PM
mmm...yet again a great unseen twist. I like your style. It's out of the ordinary which is always a good thing. Great poem, but again there were a few minor meter difficulties that can be fixed fairly easily.
Re: Live by Luv2write 23-Mar-03/6:39 PM
Hm...wow. As you can see religion is a touchy subject. Something that anyone and everyone is willing to argue with, since no two people have the same exact beliefs. Cheers to you for hitting such a controversial subject on a public site.
Re: Tears Falling by loneshadow29 19-Apr-03/7:17 AM
Nice job with an overdone subject. You added something different to it..just what I can't put my finger on, but I like it.
Re: Salt Water by OneFingerAnswer 19-Apr-03/7:22 AM
Overall an amazing poem, but just felt like silly didn't really fit in though. Maybe you could look for a different adjective. Since in the whole dark and wise tone of the whole poem, silly is a little naive and childish.
Re: Leave by Luv2write 21-Apr-03/7:05 PM
Again a nice twist...though it does get a little repetitive before you get there...
Re: Life by Luv2write 21-Apr-03/7:10 PM
I've seen you do better. I know this has a deeper message but you could have written it a little differently to portray it in a way that would have been more powerful. My advice is to keep the good idea and try again in a different style.
Re: ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write 21-Apr-03/7:13 PM
Jomegan?...

The meter needs a little work...but the idea and rhyme are good.
Re: Lost by Luv2write 21-Apr-03/7:17 PM
This is one of your best poems that I have seen. It definitely gets my approval. Nice job.


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