Tears Falling

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

gentle tear, born of sadness caressing her cheek trying to numb the pain which ravages her broken heart but alas, the wound she possesses cannot be healed alone so others come to its aid stroking her cheek ever so softly trying desperately to calm her to heal her broken heart but the pain is too great her tears will not ease her suffering so many tears falling in vain no salvation for the fallen

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[7] Bachus 17-Apr-03/10:30 PM Reply

Are the others the ones doing her at night now? Bastards.

[8] GekoHawaii 19-Apr-03/7:17 AM Reply

Nice job with an overdone subject. You added something different to it..just what I can't put my finger on, but I like it.