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Tears Falling (Free verse) by loneshadow29

gentle tear, born of sadness caressing her cheek trying to numb the pain which ravages her broken heart but alas, the wound she possesses cannot be healed alone so others come to its aid stroking her cheek ever so softly trying desperately to calm her to heal her broken heart but the pain is too great her tears will not ease her suffering so many tears falling in vain no salvation for the fallen

GekoHawaii 19-Apr-03/7:17 AM
Nice job with an overdone subject. You added something different to it..just what I can't put my finger on, but I like it.




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