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Salt Water (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer
Funny drops, these bits of salted water
Just as their fluid magnifies what we see through them,
Their presence magnifies what we feel through them
Sadness deepens to despair
Joy rises and sores
Anger burns and flares
Laughter bursts and bubbles ever more
And when we cry for no reason,
That silly emptyness rings
Vibrating deeper and louder
Shaking to the very core
As if the tears were meant to flow out with every echoed boom
Leaving in their wake a vast and meaningless container
Running on our faces
Leaving trails
Like some dried Dead Sea
Salted and lifeless
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9567
Posted: April 19, 2003 2:18 AM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2003 10:44 PM PDT
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