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in here (i lost a piece of my mind) (Free verse) by nolan
one day i will break free (from where?)
i won't need a crutch (how strong, or is it how many?)
i will have everything i need (which is nothing)
i will be free (which is?)
one day i am going to smile (like i am now)
it might take a while (more like a few minutes)
but i will be there (but i am here)
make sure to wait for them (are they coming?)
one day i will set a fire (to my face)
to all of the broken wires (ok i lied)
that surround the sun (and melt my hands)
and i will pour out the rum (with alcohol i am done)
yeah one day i will get there (yeah one day)
one day i will stop to stare (probaly just daze off)
i know i will (convince myself that to stay strong)
i can, i will (yeah keep telling myself that)
excuse me, there is a slight chill (in here)
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Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9568
Posted: May 12, 2003 11:37 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2003 12:57 AM PDT
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