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mirror (Free verse) by famenglory
Threw away my mirror today The reflected image made me cry It fell to the floor and shattered Made me stop and think That the reflected image Was all my fault. Glass shards everywhere Cutting my soul, the soles of my feet And shards crying tears of blood
Up the ladder: The wheelchair
Down the ladder: "loveless life"
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5359
Posted: February 17, 2003 5:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 5:38 PM PST
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[8] deleted user @ 68.82.229.248 | 17-Feb-03/5:57 PM | Reply
Its never your fault...always theirs..just remember that
[9] GekoHawaii @ 68.82.228.14 | 23-Mar-03/6:20 PM | Reply
Wow...very powerful
[9] Luv2write @ 205.188.209.107 | 26-Mar-03/2:05 PM | Reply
An excellent poem... it stuns my brain and all I can think of to really say how I feel about this one is WOW.
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