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Free verse № 40631

The wheelchair

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

I visited someones house recently. I saw in the corner of a room a wheelchair. It was cobwebbed unkempt and broken. I searched desperatly and could not find its owner.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Feb-03/2:45 PM Reply
Good Christ! You don't think the "Wheeled-chair" was haunted, do you!?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Feb-03/2:46 PM Reply
Yes quite possible it ate said owner!
[8] Shardik 17-Feb-03/2:57 PM Reply
It was the phantom of a false slip aND FALL ACCIDENT CLAIM. a thief in the night. a door prop.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Shardik 17-Feb-03/5:08 PM Reply
Maybe it belongs to a certain turtle? How did he leave the scene so quickly. This vexes me. I am terribly vexed.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 4-Mar-03/1:50 PM Reply
did you turn it upside down and shake it thouroughly?

WHY THE HELL NOT?

give a little more here. why did you visit? why did you not find the owner? why did you care?