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The wheelchair (Free verse) by INTRANSIT I visited someones house recently.
I saw
in the corner of a room
a wheelchair.
It was cobwebbed
unkempt
and broken.
I searched desperatly
and could not find
its owner.
Up the ladder:
Mother Earth
Down the ladder:
mirror
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Posted: February 17, 2003 2:27 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 2:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1430435 Overall Rank: 5359 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96
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17-Feb-03/2:45 PM
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Good Christ! You don't think the "Wheeled-chair" was haunted, do you!?
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INTRANSIT @ 216.137.193.104
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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17-Feb-03/2:46 PM
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Yes quite possible it ate said owner!
It was the phantom of a false slip aND FALL ACCIDENT CLAIM. a thief in the night. a door prop.
Maybe it belongs to a certain turtle? How did he leave the scene so quickly. This vexes me. I am terribly vexed.
did you turn it upside down and shake it thouroughly?
WHY THE HELL NOT? give a little more here. why did you visit? why did you not find the owner? why did you care? 266 view(s)
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