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Rain (Free verse) by famenglory
Fall on my eyelash Sustain But only for a second Roll down my cheek Ruin my mascara Fall to the ground And make me a puddle Make me my ocean

Up the ladder: Ended So Fast
Down the ladder: Miracle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7257
Posted: February 17, 2003 5:37 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 5:37 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] deleted user @ 68.82.229.248 | 17-Feb-03/5:56 PM | Reply
You will become the ocean....
[8] GekoHawaii @ 68.82.228.14 | 23-Mar-03/6:17 PM | Reply
So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...
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