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Rain (Free verse) by famenglory Fall on my eyelash
Sustain
But only for a second
Roll down my cheek
Ruin my mascara
Fall to the ground
And make me a puddle
Make me my ocean
Up the ladder:
Ended So Fast
Down the ladder:
Miracle
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Posted: February 17, 2003 5:37 PM PST; Last modified: February 17, 2003 5:37 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7260 Comments:
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deleted user @ 68.82.229.248
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17-Feb-03/5:56 PM
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You will become the ocean....
So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...
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