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Ended So Fast (Free verse) by AmberNicole It ended so fast
Between you and me
I wanted to stay
But I had a need
I needed love that was true
I needed love straight from you
Love that you spoke
But never did do
Actions broke my heart in two
I gave you everything
My heart, my soul
For your love I paid,
A monstrous toll
You never listened,
You never cared
Yet, I stayed
And was always there.
But something inside me
Had had enough
Of your stupid lies
And endless bluffs.
With tears in my eyes,
And a pain in my heart,
I had to rip you apart.
I had to save myself from you
Before you killed my soul too.
Up the ladder:
Confusion
Down the ladder:
Rain
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Posted: February 15, 2003 9:03 PM PST; Last modified: February 15, 2003 9:03 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7256 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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15-Feb-03/11:37 PM
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your bio sounds tempting, but i fear your creame too bitter and at such a fare age... what is this dire age of man (and woman sometimes) coming to? TELL ME SWEET LORD LEST I COLLAPSE UNDER THE SHEER WEIGHT OF IT ALL... well accompanied by the fact that i'm cross eyed and weigh in at about 283 lbs. Pardon me... my half of a chicken two large pizzas, and six pack of bud (light of course) just arrived... fucking pink dot... i'm a lucky guy, see ya.
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