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Ended So Fast (Free verse) by AmberNicole

It ended so fast Between you and me I wanted to stay But I had a need I needed love that was true I needed love straight from you Love that you spoke But never did do Actions broke my heart in two I gave you everything My heart, my soul For your love I paid, A monstrous toll You never listened, You never cared Yet, I stayed And was always there. But something inside me Had had enough Of your stupid lies And endless bluffs. With tears in my eyes, And a pain in my heart, I had to rip you apart. I had to save myself from you Before you killed my soul too.

horus8 15-Feb-03/11:37 PM
your bio sounds tempting, but i fear your creame too bitter and at such a fare age... what is this dire age of man (and woman sometimes) coming to? TELL ME SWEET LORD LEST I COLLAPSE UNDER THE SHEER WEIGHT OF IT ALL... well accompanied by the fact that i'm cross eyed and weigh in at about 283 lbs. Pardon me... my half of a chicken two large pizzas, and six pack of bud (light of course) just arrived... fucking pink dot... i'm a lucky guy, see ya.




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