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Miracle (Other) by Enki The miracle of birth, I hear.
A time for joyous celebration.
But all around me that I see, is overpopulation.
How selfish I must be, they say.
Forget your life, you have to breed.
But I don't think we really need, another mouth to feed.
The miracle of birth, I read.
Another child is born this day.
For such a miracle as this, the world will have to pay.
Up the ladder:
Rain
Down the ladder:
Desired Height
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Posted: February 23, 2003 5:16 AM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2003 5:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7258 Comments:
i think its good, this poem so happens to be the way i think :p theres many ways ppl view things but seriously no need to say its crap if u wanna criticize be constructive at least, yeesh......
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As for if it's badly written? I'll just have to take the word of a Bard such as yourself.