Miracle

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

The miracle of birth, I hear. A time for joyous celebration. But all around me that I see, is overpopulation. How selfish I must be, they say. Forget your life, you have to breed. But I don't think we really need, another mouth to feed. The miracle of birth, I read. Another child is born this day. For such a miracle as this, the world will have to pay.

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[4] spank me baby yeah 23-Feb-03/9:52 AM Reply

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[n/a] Enki › spank me baby yeah 23-Feb-03/3:31 PM Reply

Actually the "crap" obviously does have a point. This is unlike the formatting of your comment.
As for if it's badly written? I'll just have to take the word of a Bard such as yourself.

[7] CrAzYlAdY Surukain 23-Feb-03/10:54 PM Reply

i think its good, this poem so happens to be the way i think :p theres many ways ppl view things but seriously no need to say its crap if u wanna criticize be constructive at least, yeesh......