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Miracle (Other) by Enki

The miracle of birth, I hear. A time for joyous celebration. But all around me that I see, is overpopulation. How selfish I must be, they say. Forget your life, you have to breed. But I don't think we really need, another mouth to feed. The miracle of birth, I read. Another child is born this day. For such a miracle as this, the world will have to pay.

Enki 23-Feb-03/3:31 PM
Actually the "crap" obviously does have a point. This is unlike the formatting of your comment.
As for if it's badly written? I'll just have to take the word of a Bard such as yourself.




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