Re: a comment on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Mar-05/2:23 PM
No, but I'm sure if you ask her real nice, she'll tell you to goto hell.
Re: a comment on Maybe Someday by Luzr	31-Mar-05/2:19 PM
Where, over there, lets go get his autograph No I introduce myself as a walking cliche(Because, lets face it, I am)
Re: a comment on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Mar-05/2:16 PM
Name for me one person named Stephen(The other Steven) whom can claim that they've ever kissed more than 3 girls who weren't related to them.
Re: a comment on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	31-Mar-05/2:12 PM
A3: Suicide is the ending of ones own life. Here it was done accidentally. A4: Am I a preteen, or is that all you'll let yourself see me as? Its not about suicide, that was merely what you chose to focus on.
Re: a comment on Maybe Someday by Luzr	30-Mar-05/10:13 AM
Impressive and inspiring. As always. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Mar-05/11:53 PM
A1: Because looks much as I call them such, are not weapons, by which anyone has ever bled. A2: Not really. Most people I tend to at least need a plan to kill themselves, a will, and that one last bitter spitful note speaking of the tragic irony that is life, blah blah, I hate you mother, see you in heaven(idiots). <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Against the Gorgon by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Mar-05/10:05 PM
More of a failed murder, that results in the death of the would be murder by mistake. Focus more on the images of an evil eye, and a mirror.
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove	29-Mar-05/12:38 AM
I'd almost promise, I've heard this story before. Only you did it with much better images.
Re: a comment on A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Mar-05/12:27 AM
And a good one. I'll keep that in mind when I tackle a rewrite. <3 Jason
Re: "Lovers or Friends" by jroday	28-Mar-05/9:25 AM
Few typos here and there, and a nice piece but it lacks some of the finer points of craftmanship. Things this Needs A) A good title, that doesn't give away your ending, much less the entire poem. B) A better thought out meter. C) Spellcheck. D) A rewrite. Til then -5-
Re: a comment on A Second by Luzr	28-Mar-05/7:26 AM
"A second first" as in a new first glance. I fell in love with this girl at sight. "You tend to be hard, but you are tender with this girl", simply put, I love her. What she was to me at one time, will never be forgotten. She's the reason for my greatest high of living, and my greatest low. I'd die for a second chance to be with her. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy	28-Mar-05/7:04 AM
Yeah, its me. Have no fear. My gift won't go wasted. I have youth on my side. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on The White Room by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Mar-05/2:00 AM
A1: Most of mine really have been about actual experiences, and yes, of mine. A2: Wouldn't dream of it. Couldn't imagine myself as to being so crazy as ro do something as off the wall as doing something actual. <3 Jason
Re: American Poet by horus8	25-Mar-05/12:42 PM
Rolls on floor laughing, opps.... Pissed pants, but still laughing out loud. Good stuff. -10-
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	24-Mar-05/5:41 PM
I love the "probably AIDS" bit. I can't help but wonder if that wasn't just a bit of on the ranker humor though, or is it something else? <3 Jason
Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Mar-05/1:34 AM
What a child. Grow the fuck up. Go to the local libary, and read a few big kid books. If the weastest insult possible, a hahaha, and your smoltering zero are the best you've got, give me a second, to hide in fear. Not. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Mar-05/1:30 AM
Having never read the book, I'll have to agree, but add that the pterodactal, be lit from the beak, by a lighter, using his toes.
Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	21-Mar-05/1:04 AM
Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be? <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	20-Mar-05/8:19 PM
Only because the true kings feel like letting me be. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Mar-05/10:15 AM
Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many. <3 Jason