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Maybe Someday (Free verse) by Luzr
I got myself a pocketful of wishes today
And from them I could write a thousand different ballads
Of smiling eyes and plastic reactions,
perfect and precise
Telling of a lifetime ago,
and a lingering fondness
I am caught,
struggling against
seeking for myself
the comfort of lips
wrapped tightly around
either a bottle or a barrel
I felt the tell-tale signs of a heart beat
As I stared you in the face
And the fires burned
The bandages I wore caught in the flames
Thank god that barbwire is good for closing wounds
I watched to sing tonight
And I saw your sweet blasphemy
I wondered how much of tonight
Was calculated,
and how much was careless
I saw you replace me,
making me once again your inferior
And these asides I think mean something
They don't, do they
How is it that tonight
I am feeling like
The betrayer,
When I am the betrayed
That one second that I've been asking for
I got it today plus a few more
Where you merely made me miss you
By your soft sweet whispers of secrets
Shared and once recalled, hard forgotten
I swore an oath to you
one of those chilly autumn nights
An endeavor I have never failed upon
My question sweet shadow is merely
Am I wasting tonight thinking that
Maybe, you'll be curious someday
If the taste of my lips has changed
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Posted: March 29, 2005 11:17 PM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2005 11:17 PM PST
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And thus expiring do foretell of him:
His rash fierce blaze of riot cannot last,
For violent fires soon burn out themselves;
Small showers last long, but sudden storms are short;
He tires betimes that spurs too fast betimes;
With eager feeding food doth choke the feeder:
Light vanity, insatiate cormorant,
Consuming means, soon preys upon itself.
This royal throne of kings, this scepter'd isle,
This earth of majesty, this seat of Mars,
This other Eden, demi-paradise,
This fortress built by Nature for herself
Against infection and the hand of war,
This happy breed of men, this little world,
This precious stone set in the silver sea,
Which serves it in the office of a wall,
Or as a moat defensive to a house,
Against the envy of less happier lands,
This blessed plot, this earth, this realm, this England,
This nurse, this teeming womb of royal kings,
Fear'd by their breed and famous by their birth,
Renowned for their deeds as far from home,
For Christian service and true chivalry,
As is the sepulchre in stubborn Jewry,
Of the world's ransom, blessed Mary's Son,
This land of such dear souls, this dear dear land,
Dear for her reputation through the world,
Is now leased out, I die pronouncing it,
Like to a tenement or pelting farm:
England, bound in with the triumphant sea
Whose rocky shore beats back the envious siege
Of watery Neptune, is now bound in with shame,
With inky blots and rotten parchment bonds:
That England, that was wont to conquer others,
Hath made a shameful conquest of itself.
Ah, would the scandal vanish with my life,
How happy then were my ensuing death!
<3 Jason
Do you introduce yourself to people as a writer?
No I introduce myself as a walking cliche(Because, lets face it, I am)