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Wonder (Daydreamer’s Version) (Lyric) by Miggy
Wonder Through your daily rush If I was just a crush That you held so long But never thought Of how this might last Just glaze Into the morning sun Like you needed that someone To hold your hand Until you understand Then leave him in the dust Return Back to your normal self No one could tell How in you mind You want to hide In the shadows of the dark (Chorus) No more time From all these years To release your tears Step into the light Your still mine Even with all this hate It’s just the way of faith Step into the light Ignore All your daily lies Cause denial what’s inside If reality Chooses you and me You’re taken to surprise Flashback To all my sacrifice Done without a price But everything I do Won’t satisfy you So much effort gone to waste Now stuck You are all alone With no one to lean on And just remember How we were still together Until you changed your heart (Chorus) Looking up into the sky Nothing from the past would compromise Losing control Failing yourself Wondering about this empty hell (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: Whales
Down the ladder: Maybe Someday

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3846154
Weighted score: 6.012235
Overall Rank: 1248
Posted: September 24, 2003 1:51 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2003 1:51 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 162.84.169.239 | 24-Sep-03/3:40 PM | Reply
"How in you mind" your
[0] capachijim @ 24.168.26.48 | 26-Sep-03/3:26 PM | Reply
its a decent rendition of teh first one. -9-
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