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Against the Gorgon (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
If looks could kill then
I'd be lying on the floor
As you fell over clutching your chest
A victim of smoke and mirrors
And I'd wonder what it felt like
To see the gun that got me
Fired by my own hand
An accidental suicide
I'm surprised things like this
Don't happen more often
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.375
Weighted score: 5.907677
Overall Rank: 1449
Posted: March 28, 2005 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2005 9:11 AM PST
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Q2: Generally speaking, would you say a suicide can be accidental?
A2: Not really. Most people I tend to at least need a plan to kill themselves, a will, and that one last bitter spitful note speaking of the tragic irony that is life, blah blah, I hate you mother, see you in heaven(idiots).
<3 Jason
Q4: That's because you're a preteen. And why did you write a poem about suicide then?
A4: Am I a preteen, or is that all you'll let yourself see me as? Its not about suicide, that was merely what you chose to focus on.