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Against the Gorgon (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

If looks could kill then I'd be lying on the floor As you fell over clutching your chest A victim of smoke and mirrors And I'd wonder what it felt like To see the gun that got me Fired by my own hand An accidental suicide I'm surprised things like this Don't happen more often

zodiac 31-Mar-05/5:39 AM
Q3: That's illegible. Would you care to try again? (HINT: Looks aren't suicide implements either, except in your backward notion of suicide, which we should define for the sake of future comments in this string as "almost anything dramatic and self-glorifying as long as it doesn't involve actual death")

Q4: That's because you're a preteen. And why did you write a poem about suicide then?




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