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Against the Gorgon (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

If looks could kill then I'd be lying on the floor As you fell over clutching your chest A victim of smoke and mirrors And I'd wonder what it felt like To see the gun that got me Fired by my own hand An accidental suicide I'm surprised things like this Don't happen more often

poodietat 29-Mar-05/8:52 PM
I don't get it. If it's an accidental suicide, then why is one person on the floor and the other clutching his/her chest? Is it a murder-suicide? A double suicide? Or does the chest-clutching mean something other than death?




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