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pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom You've disregarded everything
That I ever said and burned me
And I used to think that we were friends
Apparently all I am to you is...
Worse than what you've ever been
Am I so easily forgotten
Do those drunken nights mean anything
Or was I merely, just a distraction
I used to lie on your bed
Watching movies and just talking
Wrapped in the comfort of you
And occasionally we'd break into old games
That we've both been known to play
I guess this time you got me
So as I crash, healing from this burn
Thinking to myself... You never learn
You've inspired something in me
More than just a spark of envy
A borderline frenzy, that just might crack
The walls I've built to house my hatred
Are you ready to dance with the devil's son
You've tasted my pain
You've tasted my passion
Are you ready to taste my fury
You thought I was kidding
When I said this hurt me
Well now I have to laugh in your face
Next time you call me your friend
A smile will cross my lips
And I will have to call you a liar
I'd do anything for a friend
In case you can't tell
I'm done being that to you
Up the ladder:
A Short Letter
Down the ladder:
Memories Of Home
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Posted: March 19, 2005 7:57 AM PST; Last modified: March 19, 2005 7:57 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.218431 Overall Rank: 967 Comments:
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Christ your insouciant.
Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many.
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Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be?
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1) Are you on The O.C.?
2) Are you reading The Da Vinci Code?
lol. No, Angels and Demons was a good read but tedious, to pick back up again(It took me a month to sit down and finish it), so I decided against The Da Vinci Code, despite Dan Brown's great crafting of factual fictions.
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I think Dan Brown could have crafted The Da Vinci Code better if he'd shat on a single sheet of paper and folded it into a bad origami pterodactyl with his lips.
Having never read the book, I'll have to agree, but add that the pterodactal, be lit from the beak, by a lighter, using his toes.
hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha
What a child. Grow the fuck up. Go to the local libary, and read a few big kid books. If the weastest insult possible, a hahaha, and your smoltering zero are the best you've got, give me a second, to hide in fear. Not.
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.....new skin under the burns......
This poem brought it to mind. That's all I can remember of my "burned" poem. I was pretty crazy over that guy. I've forgotten all about him now, oh...and the poem was thrown away with the memory. That's all I could retrieve from that dusty part of my memory.
Good stuff, pinkbunny-guy. I'll read some more of yours.