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pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

You've disregarded everything That I ever said and burned me And I used to think that we were friends Apparently all I am to you is... Worse than what you've ever been Am I so easily forgotten Do those drunken nights mean anything Or was I merely, just a distraction I used to lie on your bed Watching movies and just talking Wrapped in the comfort of you And occasionally we'd break into old games That we've both been known to play I guess this time you got me So as I crash, healing from this burn Thinking to myself... You never learn You've inspired something in me More than just a spark of envy A borderline frenzy, that just might crack The walls I've built to house my hatred Are you ready to dance with the devil's son You've tasted my pain You've tasted my passion Are you ready to taste my fury You thought I was kidding When I said this hurt me Well now I have to laugh in your face Next time you call me your friend A smile will cross my lips And I will have to call you a liar I'd do anything for a friend In case you can't tell I'm done being that to you

juliharrelson 19-Mar-05/7:10 PM
I can tell you are a pretty intelligent person, maybe above average, and very articulate...I like this poem. I wrote one about being "burned" once....one of the phrases was

.....new skin under the burns......

This poem brought it to mind. That's all I can remember of my "burned" poem. I was pretty crazy over that guy. I've forgotten all about him now, oh...and the poem was thrown away with the memory. That's all I could retrieve from that dusty part of my memory.

Good stuff, pinkbunny-guy. I'll read some more of yours.




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