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9-Feb-03/1:41 PM |
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Ten more minutes, you can do it.
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14-Feb-03/3:38 PM |
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You make me laugh quite a bit, and today was no exception... this is remarkably reveiling piece. of shit. 10! 11. oh, happy eros was a little fage with cherub wheels...wait a minute..HOLY SHIT I FIGURED IT OUT FUCkE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (god was building me a hotrod ha ha ha i got it a wheel chair haaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh) dark angel is a gaye genius allergic to shell fish in a wheel chair with diabetes...holy shit and his whole thing with shoes stems from the fact that his are all symbolically useless... holy shit, and his problem with jesus is because his parents were very devoted catholics and since he was always sickly and could never fit behind the pews they would shove him in the damp drafty rear corner of the church... that where his surreal anti-pro jesu fetish enmity is derived from... and the pirate thing..well fuck ..who doesn't like pirates. well my worke is done i can sleep even less now. happy valentines day you all.
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14-Feb-03/3:40 PM |
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shit, but what about the jewish thing... hmmm. he's not? better yet..that too.
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| Re: 75%! by Crakyamuni |
14-Feb-03/4:08 PM |
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| Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz |
16-Feb-03/11:47 AM |
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| Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig |
16-Feb-03/11:52 AM |
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Decent, but why do i keep counting eighteen? You know when i was younger i lived on the island of Kauai. I saw a pig roast. Many beautiful sunsets. I watched them kill the pig. I have never heard a sound come out of any living thing even similiar. Have you heard that sound? I'll wait to vote for your assesment of the structure.
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| Re: THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton |
17-Feb-03/2:55 PM |
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Garret, your irascibility is not a good side effect to dwell within when one is traversing the often booby trapped road to recovery and normality.
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| Re: The wheelchair by INTRANSIT |
17-Feb-03/2:57 PM |
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It was the phantom of a false slip aND FALL ACCIDENT CLAIM. a thief in the night. a door prop.
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17-Feb-03/3:17 PM |
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17-Feb-03/3:23 PM |
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I know... isn't mind boggling?
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17-Feb-03/6:29 PM |
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| Re: For my wife by INTRANSIT |
17-Feb-03/6:50 PM |
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must you mix the doves with Saturn? you'll rupture the mammal space continueum and force darwin to dry hump kubric in a swimming pool full of nestle's strawberry milk... what? lol.
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| Re: To Laugh Or Cry by casey |
17-Feb-03/11:16 PM |
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Or the girl that can chop off your pee pee with a potato peeler?
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| Re: lilah by Sapphire |
17-Feb-03/11:19 PM |
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Well. You would know. I believe that your images could tie in some how, more easily to what you are attempting to say here. If you did not push them so.
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| Re: The Voice of the Night (dedicated to Mr. PIG) by Sylvia Bravo |
18-Feb-03/2:12 PM |
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
18-Feb-03/5:14 PM |
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Listen, could you write a poem about how you and me are two entirely different people that write nothing like one another? thanks. It's just that i'm getting phone calls were people are claiming you're me, and we're not. I'm sure you can respect the seriousness of the situation. thanks.
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| Re: Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig |
20-Feb-03/1:23 PM |
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What if the earth consmes the sun after it has turned into a red dwarf, naturally than the earth breaks solar wind? groovy.
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| Re: Resurrection (for Gods Wife) by Mr Pig |
20-Feb-03/1:25 PM |
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first line was mighty mighty boss tones, the last line unfortunately, was not.
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| Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
20-Feb-03/1:28 PM |
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This is profound, but CAN YOU FUCKING COUNT FOR THE UPTILIANTH TIME 18 18 18 18 IT NEEDS TO BE 17 17 17 . NOW this is a choice haiku. lose the AS inh S2, and i'll ten it many times taking you into the mid sixes 666 (i have lobbyists abroad on the hill, see).
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| Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
21-Feb-03/12:58 AM |
hee hee. you are good i'll give you that. zzinnia thinks you are me psycho chick part ten thinks that you are me, but you are not me. so, trickster... i will call you loki in compliment and say good show. nice revision. here are your tens. enjoy your secret. URSA MAJOR HONEY CONE AWARDE! 10. ps. i would wager you are cadacus, but hightened and evolved...the blooding was an exceptional poem, but really, i can see the difference in our poetry, obviously. why they cannot eludes me.
overall though it is neither here nor there.
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