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20 most recent comments by Shardik (441-460)

Re: Horus8 Vs. Book Learning by TanHand 21-Feb-03/9:00 PM
Ha! Ha! true true, but i do that with or without you or love, that dear is why i'm an artist revered by my peers as skilled in the art of scotch taping while proclaimimg myself the pyrgayte sunflower of the china seas. besides... some party's are just dying for rainbows like me to do a little dance, thanks for fueling the legend of (ding dong) fuck, pink dot... where was i, ah yes the legend of 'begger lance' the golfing dr. tickling, BITER OF EARLOBES! Gemstones when worn by a lady, should be real and peridot, not fake and plastic. A biting was called for by the supreme bringer of bites, i could not stop the order, and the week before you was another in venice when i threw my shoes in a tree with a painting lass of mine and then impaled my palm while fetching them back upon the bamboo, you are just the tail at the end of the beast called... 'thee belted beast of notchingham'..
Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8 21-Feb-03/9:05 PM
Why do you consistantly dwell upon your mother horus? Look at the people you attract to you by doing that. You can't fix Marrianne, let her go Grendal. just bring flowers when she breaks the ground as we all must do. then break wind.
regarding some deleted poem... 26-Feb-03/10:39 AM
Yep. that's a fragment alright.
regarding some deleted poem... 26-Feb-03/11:29 AM
Meatloaf has man tits.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Mar-03/4:14 PM
I guess when da isn't a wheelchaired fag he's a heterosexual with a fine taste for 'the womem of the bangbus'? What a scholar, and an insightful provider of cutting edge pornography. Better watch your sugar levels sport! We wouldn't want you staining the litmus paper with your grasp on reality.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/4:47 PM
American poetry sucks.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/4:54 PM
That made no sense. You want him to not forget you, but you want to forget him, am i to understand this correctly? better then your other one though, how the guitar or the biting air fits in one could only dare to guess if that process wasn't absolutely indistinguishable from not really giving a loaf (a nice way of saying sh_t!) i'm toning it down these days we wouldn't want anyone to accidentilly stab their ass out or say just kill themselves. God forbid jim jones could talk 800 stupid americans into killing themselves for no reason. Perhaps that's why american poetry sucks.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/4:57 PM
"Protray something deep." YESM ME TOO.LOL.YAAFR.
try replacing the word "write" for rock.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/4:59 PM
That's funny i just read this out loud replacing the word "write" with rock, and i pissed myself splendid. no shit, i swear.
Re: The Guardian, page nineteen by Nicholas Jones 4-Mar-03/5:49 PM
The laws of the universe states that to be quite normal Mr. Jones.
Re: Homecomings by Nicholas Jones 4-Mar-03/5:52 PM
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/5:58 PM
I'll tell him to choke on the deadsea scrolls. I'm a Mason not some self obsessing Catholic cry baby. I'll design him a new church and let him blow me 'tween the pews. We'll get drunk on the blood of hayzeus and eat his body, too. Bob? you are a lazy bad chef and a shame upon the vatican, i feel that much more delusional for having let you think you can't blink. poof*
Re: Mens Cocks Have No Style by spank me baby yeah 4-Mar-03/6:18 PM
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Mar-03/6:26 PM
Jesus, I never knew you cared. Sorry.
Re: First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6-Mar-03/12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
Re: Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95 6-Mar-03/1:42 PM
Cauldron.
Within.
Blackened.
Re: first kiss by lost in america 7-Mar-03/12:03 PM
it's okay, but hardly profound.
Re: I have nothing left to steal. by lost in america 7-Mar-03/12:05 PM
That's good though. Still not tapping hidden ideas however, but damn fine work.
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 7-Mar-03/12:08 PM
That's good shit. Haven't i read this somewhere? Glad i didn't put my foot in my mouth. You are a better poet, and i could learn from you. Thanks, you're right i am still a boy, but i'm growing fast. Great poem.
Re: who? by Crakyamuni 7-Mar-03/12:30 PM
lol.


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