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20 most recent comments by Shardik (421-440)

Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 7-Mar-03/2:17 PM
"Tanging taglay ay pag-asa" likewise i'm sure.
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Mar-03/2:21 PM
"Voiced out of the beard of
Tobacco'd old man"

could this be pluralized? i believe it would help.
Re: Taller Girl by lastobelus 9-Mar-03/4:12 PM
The end was not as strong as i imagined, but it started and arced quite well. 7.
Re: Paranoia by lastobelus 9-Mar-03/4:16 PM
You're funny, somehow i recognize the writing a bit. Then again my mind is an odd device i recognize everything and nothing. take an 8, because i just can't tell anymore.
Re: Fireworks on the Island by horus8 9-Mar-03/4:20 PM
Oh doyle rules.
Re: Klondike by wLeBlancw 9-Mar-03/4:30 PM
umm. pardon me Brandon, could you possibly use a stronger metaphor here for the insulting snow? Because...Well...See if my boobs can't be evil and curved then your snow can't passive aggressively insulting.

<AND THE CROWD GOES wild. Evil wins again!!!!!!!!!.
I woulld like to thank Satan, Jews, and Television, also i wanna give a shout out to all of my aborted fetuses that secretely hate me. word. umm i'd like to thank my manager for putting up with my spontaneous nudity and wall knicking wheel chair activities, and last but not least i would like to thank the plague of the future. the crew of the space shuttle r.i.p. idiotic leaders and the ebola virus, and a Catholic church strewn and soaked in homosexuality and aids. (like that's a big surprise)

This, unlike fetuses hating us from heaven, is a fact Brandon, and your future. Thank you folks i'm here all fucking day!
Re: Klondike by wLeBlancw 9-Mar-03/5:41 PM
Sir, superman is not fat. www.gangbox.com

I have abs of steel and finely crafted hair, and am good at generally, everything.thanks again. nice try. I once shot a mooseknuckle in the Yukon. I served it with a luke warm chiante Brandon. Also; I am surrounded by love, it is you that feels guilty, not i friend, it was your poem.lol. I have a healthy son, and no guilt. LOOK OUT BEHIND YOU! GOOD GOD THE MEWLING OF AN ANgRY FETUS! please. "Do as thou wilt is the whole of the law" Alister Crowely, Rush who? I'm an anarchist idiot not a fucking television personality, but if this was a debate... My friend you lost back at the angry fetus, unless of course you are John Carpenter and designing a new film called 'they're angry, tiny, and slippery' "Bitter Fetus III, the crawl back".
Re: Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 9-Mar-03/6:12 PM
Leo

Horoscope (by Astrocenter.com)
A selfish attitude on your part will not be tolerated today, regardless of the circumstances, dear Leo.
Don't make it worse for yourself by pretending that you don't notice the hurt feelings of those around
you. People are likely to be extra sensitive today, so be careful of trying to impose your will on
someone who really just wants nothing more than an ear to talk to and a shoulder to cry on.

Whoops, so much for that.lol.
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Mar-03/12:33 PM
I wonder if Dr. Hawkins has that sort of negative attitude about the misfortunate?
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Mar-03/12:43 PM
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Re: Sympathetic Guilt by middenHeap 14-Mar-03/4:09 PM
Violence is for the daft.
Re: iodine and baby oil by rockinindividual 18-Mar-03/9:52 PM
There are some very interesting symbols and feelings twisting around in this piece. 8.
Re: The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer 18-Mar-03/9:59 PM
weren't we suppose to discuss something? try jeremi_handrinos@yahoo.com
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Mar-03/9:25 AM
The turd cutter pondered the penis shaped potato with a sigh then went back to work.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Mar-03/9:33 AM
Somehow, your last stanza blew up leaving goo and limbs all over the others. Ruining this almost chuckle worthy piece. Shame.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Mar-03/9:38 AM
Now that was a lovely foreclosure.
Re: Ode to a cock muncher by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 28-Mar-03/9:43 AM
Perneum pushers. hilarious.
Re: Guitar Lesson by Dancer 28-Mar-03/10:41 AM
That's why nixon started drinking scotch too.
Re: Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217 2-Apr-03/1:00 AM
This must of been how the Aztecs felt too, before the shit went down. You'd better get ready, because the gnostics are the leat of your worries. Picture Allah with a bad case of SARS sitting next to you on a long flight home. better hold your breath Chirpy, there's turbulence ahead. As for the difference between us? Natural talent and about a 100 iq points. You wouldn't now an agnostic from a used taoist's hand towel if Simon the mage was working magic from the recesses of your large intestine. That is all. You are excused.
Re: Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah 2-Apr-03/1:03 AM
Think retro couches, and louvers on a 1985 Chrysler laser coupe.


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