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Paranoia (Free verse) by lastobelus
All day long I
done the fun-shun run
but one come cunning anyhow
and took what was mine!
all that serious-
ness
did me nought...
so then it comes:
puhnoya
p-schwa-schwa-neu-schwa
creeps like that egg-in-the-hair
joke
over me and desire and belief
'n' all the what-not I need
runs together
out the bottom of my feet leaving me cold.
uh-oh
No one tells what the
judgement was, what
was decided but
all were clearly watching - some
looked away or even they were grinning.
-- it is this thing, this grinning
what's come
over me, around me,
everywhere this grinning
until it comes one day up too
difficult to say or keep inside me
(duly scribbling their evaluation in notebooks)
'n I say fuck it and run.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7023
Posted: March 9, 2003 3:42 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2004 6:25 PM PST
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