| Re: We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass |
16-Sep-02/7:21 PM |
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Oh and guys he clearly states he has a wife.
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| Re: Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit |
17-Sep-02/8:18 AM |
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I thought you said you chatted as fred but you were in fact Frass. How come bein'Vegan is here? hmmm...?
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| Re: House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/12:42 PM |
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Wow! your work is good. Please read my Hope poem and leave a comment. I liked this a lot. I never seem to find your name when I check the random poems though, then again I never see mine even when I'm not logged in yet.
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| Re: spirit of a grama by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/12:45 PM |
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Marvelous. Jeez I need to improve.
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| Re: spirit of a grama by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/12:45 PM |
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One problem though, isn't it supposed to be "Grandma" in the title?
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| Re: Why... by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/12:47 PM |
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Lol. Questions we all ask ourselves. This is thoughful.
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| Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros |
18-Sep-02/1:01 PM |
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Yuck!eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww. Green semen! eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww.
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| Re: Black Buns by Bachus |
18-Sep-02/1:11 PM |
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I guess everyone would have been less irritated if you didn't use the 'n' word, and maybe your so-called message would have been received.
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| Re: [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz |
18-Sep-02/1:16 PM |
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I don't get it. I think you are describing an un-wanted pregnancy. I guess you blame the man and hate the child<--- this of course was my overall impression.
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| Re: Stifled by wordsphincter |
18-Sep-02/1:24 PM |
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Hi Word. I think he/she is trying to create an image of eyes receiving and comprehending(grasping) the image of the courts. It's kinda like my use of the words abhor and accrue in my now deleted "Wandering thoughts".
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| Re: Essential Love by unknown |
18-Sep-02/5:20 PM |
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| Re: angelic by deafmute2000 |
18-Sep-02/5:23 PM |
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Belittling and sweet at the same time. What usually makes me decrease marks is the wrong/non usage of apostrophe. E.g. you're not your and we're not were.
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| Re: House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas |
18-Sep-02/6:06 PM |
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Hey are you really half African? tell me, tell me! Where did all your points go?
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| Re: Intervention by livingcanvas |
19-Sep-02/8:16 AM |
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I'm already forming a tune...:)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Sep-02/8:40 AM |
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Lots and lots of typos. Otherwise, it's good. Last word 'skin' not 'ski'. Last line also, 'than' not 'then'. 'Describe' not 'discribe'.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Sep-02/8:41 AM |
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I also noticed your 'discription', it's "dEscription"
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
27-Sep-02/2:05 PM |
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You must really enjoy being nasty to people, you are the reason I've deleted 10 of my poems from this site. I think I will just move my poems to poetry.com at least there I won't get insulted.
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| Re: A call to arms by INTRANSIT |
7-Oct-02/7:58 AM |
Unexpectedly Nice, the tongue though seems well...
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
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| Re: Why... by livingcanvas |
7-Oct-02/8:02 AM |
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...haven't you posted new poetry?
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9-Oct-02/6:31 PM |
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