Re: Twisted Dimension by DreamMachine	9-Oct-02/6:43 PM
I believe you mean, "....A whistle's blown..." and the spelling is 'faggot' in reference to the wood-related meaning of 'faggot'.
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	15-Oct-02/8:12 AM
LOL! I come in after a brief spell and you blast me with this maggot(AIDs)infected poem. Your rhyming rocks! As much as I want to give this a zero for grave generalization on your part, I'll add a 1 before the zero.
Re: Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT	16-Oct-02/6:25 PM
The tambourine just doesn't scan well because I associate tambourines with women, other than that, I like it.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	16-Oct-02/6:59 PM
You are melodramatic, rhyme extremely well and like shit(e). What am I to do with you? Please read my Bum's rhyme, it was for you.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	16-Oct-02/7:01 PM
And you definitely get a plus for talking 16th century-like. :D
Re: Haiku by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/10:24 AM
Nice haiku. Did you miss me?
Re: For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:39 AM
How optimistically sweet
Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:41 AM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! that one's good. Doesn't anyone else see the joke in this? Sweetie did you actually like Ya-ya? be truthful.
Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:42 AM
You should have made the last line more vehement by adding an !
Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:45 AM
Hey, is what the priest saying and what you're saying in some kind of pattern? The count is the same... And what's the hayden suprise symphony doing there?
Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:53 AM
yes. :)
Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:53 AM
I like your poem it is funny.
Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~	11-Dec-02/10:54 AM
Hey where's the will anyway?
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	11-Dec-02/11:13 AM
Do you eat shit or something? and did you vote 10 times for yourself that must have taken a lot of work and courage.
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	11-Dec-02/11:16 AM
Other than you repugnant love for shit ( I think you must talk to your shit while you poop or something either that or you've eaten shit. Tell me, how did it taste, Like pig meat?) Other than that, this is funny. No really the last line is not sarcastic.
Re: My Friend? by Blade	11-Dec-02/11:22 AM
is gonareha some kind of rotten balsamic sauce over rotten kidney beans dish? How about I give you what you deserve for your effort.
Re: My Friend? by Blade	11-Dec-02/11:33 AM
Jeez Maria and Blade are getting the last rung since I've been here. Hi blade I'm the bipolar one. I was just about to leave and pretend I did not see the stuff I saw, considering that I have used english wrongly on more than one occassion, I thought I might have some compassion for you. Reading your poem twice changed all that, it is exactly what everyone else calls it: SHIT(E)!!!!
Re: one word by Blade	11-Dec-02/11:38 AM
This does not in any qualify as a free verse!!! How can you insult the laws of poetry and call this a free verse?! Nicompoop! Imbecile! Twerp! Dweeb!
Re: Daywalker by Blade	11-Dec-02/11:51 AM
Blade, you really need to get the movie blade out of your head. I bet you know every part of that movie. You and Maria should try not to enjoy the I'm-the-victim, everyone-is-being-mean-to-me rung too much. This is a poetry website. Take a break, like I do. If you wish you could just grab them and shake them, you can't. Besides, you sound extremely dumb and childish (pay attention I didn't say child-like let's not insult children) when you answer criticism with anger and curses. Simply take the criticism, better the poem or get rid of it and start again. Come back when your poems look less like shit(e).
Re: Daywalker by Blade	11-Dec-02/11:52 AM
Is it me or is lamp and post supposed to be apart?