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Twisted Dimension (Free verse) by DreamMachine I hear a cry,
And an angel screams,
My words are shattered,
But I still think twisted dreams,
Reality sucks,
But I heed no cause,
Only for a short second of time do I stop to pause,
A whistles blown,
And they call out my name,
Screaming come back you fagot,
Its the only way to stay sane says my brain,
And as the world turns for just one more minute,
I wake alone,
But i'm drowning in it
Up the ladder:
Thousand Tears
Down the ladder:
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Posted: October 1, 2002 10:03 AM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2002 10:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6125903 Overall Rank: 12451 Comments:
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Amelia @ 198.146.137.204
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9-Oct-02/6:43 PM
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I believe you mean, "....A whistle's blown..." and the spelling is 'faggot' in reference to the wood-related meaning of 'faggot'.
while squatting on the phone (should add at end)
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