Re: a comment on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8	5-Mar-03/7:36 PM
The are called Griffon vultures appropriately enough Durt.
Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3	5-Mar-03/12:07 AM
This poem was much more interesting with the other comments. Impressive display at maintaning your credibility and the credibilty of self mutalating cry babies everywhere, may I add. Bravo.
Re: Look Who's Talking by OneFingerAnswer	4-Mar-03/11:54 PM
You know personaly i think you did well here. Last stanza "within" i think would click better. Now, there is a bit of blah as far as the material involved goes (just my opinion i'm sure the bible belt would disagree) but that's the joy of poetry now isn't?
Re: Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus	2-Mar-03/1:55 PM
If you weren't me i would rape your mouth with a skunk and a sling shot, bastard.
Re: Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton	2-Mar-03/12:26 PM
I think your last stanza did the splits.
Re: Leaving Home by temptalia	2-Mar-03/12:28 AM
Good green kelp.
Re: Lovers Game by scitz	1-Mar-03/11:10 PM
Michael Hutchinson Rocks!!!!!!!!!
Re: The Red Light Man by scitz	1-Mar-03/11:03 PM
That was swell.
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/8:12 PM
I will concur with you about the last line of the poem though, and that is all, thank you good night sir.
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/8:05 PM
What? You think a genius can't be a fucking dim wit, or a know it all who knows nothing occasionally. It's the balance of life. I do think you are smart and funny and you are a blast to read and heckle with, but there are times even you and me are wrong and jesus too. it's okay, we are right the other 98% of the time, but here you are wrong. Have you ever been an alter boy, and a male hustler, i highly doubt it, therefore you are comparing this story to what they have taught you to compare it to, and you are wrong, and so are they. It's just that simple
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/7:56 PM
I'm not huffy. I just think that you are being bias. 4, 10 2, 5, 9, whatever, i don't recall sighting the rating as having an axis point in my argument, thank you good night. What bothered me was you completely avoided at all costs what this poem was about on purpose, or you really don't know. one or the other.
Re: a comment on Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/7:12 PM
It's not like a hobby, because of the ridiculous amounts of money, and the constant corruption involved. At first one would like to think of it along the lines of hobby but quickley it mutates. Like Carpenter's the thing. Then you spend the rest of your time absorbed by hunting it while it hunt's youu
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/7:01 PM
If you really believe what you have said here, than you have a lot to learn about a lot of things. Pandering to an audience? Are you fucking high? What audience? What scorn? Nobody is scorning the male prostitute here... He is just letting go like he came in. There is nothing to do with comedy, or somehow how making the reader laugh to somehow then regret their laughter. Tell me this, When you shit at the toilet do you draw a fucking blueprint with an agenda about how your ass will feel when coming face to face with it's reflection? i doubt it, so why do it here, or period. It's not meant to be that complicated. Fuck, no wonder you are socially shunned. Now if this poem was about oil painting i would lend you a few more moments, but it's not, so piss off (aids? do you even know anyone with aids idiot? SHUT THE FUCK UP!)
Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/6:50 PM
Maybe because it's not a recipe, turnip toes. You think you have a grasp of what i'm attempting to do here with your comment?, but the only thing you're grasping onto is your own decrepid fucking ego, Lord Ganus, and once again, do you know how funny it is to recieve such an enlightening critique upon this poeem by Lord Ganus? of all the fucking impossibly assinine things? You are childishly amusing, but little more than that Lord Ganus./ Next time try Sir scrotum, or perhaps Baron Duck butter, or even the more stimulating Duke of Fagginton. virility? Jesus, sometimes you give me indigestion noodle nose.
Re: Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Feb-03/1:52 AM
my compliments. here. 9.
Re: THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand	22-Feb-03/1:47 AM
I left her latest e-mail on your other poem. I thought you would get a kick out of which direction she landed in after your kick. lol. ah, great poem, naturally. now i was wondering, one cook to another...trout? what cheese and what wine goes with a nice 9 lb filet of german brown? sharp cheddar and chardonay, of course, but what would be your choice? In case... you know... you stopped by for dinner. wow, how about that muti huh? hates me, but wants to sign me to virgin? now that's ironic in so many ways it collapses the colon invertically.
Re: HOW TO BE FUNNY by Lord Ganus	22-Feb-03/1:26 AM
all the shit i've said on poemranker is shit you've already said. i'm about to go out, so i'm gonna make this quick. i met the president of virgin records and now i work for a music management co. i can help you. give me a cd of your latest recordings. if you're still moody and need time that's fine. at any rate, know that i would never tell anybody what you've shared with me. i'm serious. that's why i go on poemranker, because it's a way to inflict damage but not really. i know you know me better than that and i don't lie. you have my word that i will not contact you unless of course you call and i return a call. you can blow this off if you want, but it's a good opportunity.... save it and maybe e-mail me back in a few days. -T My answer, is of course, no thank you tanya. not now, not ever, but i am producing a young alternative band called,' The unsellables ' they're at notachanceinhellflake@toodliekissass.com
Re: Reply To the 9,000 Poets Against War. by Blue Magpie	22-Feb-03/12:55 AM
Full of insightful novelties.9.
Re: ode to kurt by NobodyGirl9	22-Feb-03/12:51 AM
Ornella love, Kurtiny on the bounty.
Re: HOW TO BE FUNNY by Lord Ganus	22-Feb-03/12:34 AM
Jesus Nick, profound, but what of the mixing of cheeses with popstars if Todd Rungren is in my fromt room drinking newcastle with me right now?