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24-Sep-04/8:12 AM |
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| Re: Ghost by Caducus |
24-Sep-04/8:15 AM |
i love lines 12 and 13, thats great.
gave ya an 8 cause the end is kinda out of place
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24-Sep-04/8:33 AM |
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| Re: Me helping Me by ThoughtfulSoul |
29-Sep-04/5:43 AM |
you know i swere that exact thought process has gone through my head before, compleate with spelling mistakes. and i just found out that they tend to say yes more often than no, but i think there just trying to be nice, witch is fucked up, cant they just be truthfull? fuck it... anyway -10-
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| Re: behind the mirror by skaskowski |
29-Sep-04/5:46 AM |
i could deal with some happy pills right a bout now
-10-
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| Re: !!! by Jezabele-In-Hell |
13-Dec-04/9:20 AM |
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| Re: Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell |
13-Dec-04/9:25 AM |
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bruises on the heart fade much more slowly than those of the body. sometimes there never really gone and the slightest touch or a harsh thought can bring your bruises to the surface again
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| Re: ... by Jezabele-In-Hell |
13-Dec-04/9:28 AM |
remember, life is just a circle, and your family dances in it.
-9- for once again being in my head....
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| Re: They who would have me forget by BleedingRose |
13-Dec-04/9:32 AM |
we really do have a lot in common, i always get hung on shit too. just feels wrong to forget it...
-10-
i think this is your best one, well mabye the one about truth is better, but there close anyway
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| Re: Better Sex by Dovina |
14-Dec-04/10:45 AM |
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16-Dec-04/8:34 AM |
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omg that is funny shit -10-
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| Re: Forsaken Love by Blue Magpie |
16-Dec-04/8:55 AM |
i like it
-8- cause it was semi-confusing, but i like the message
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| Re: Some Poem by jauser |
16-Dec-04/9:02 AM |
haha what a shitty poem -9-
i'll give you 10-(what its worth)
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| Re: Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:06 AM |
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sometimes you just gotta scrach -8-
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| Re: Jesus by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:21 AM |
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such truth. gave you a 9 since the damn jews killed him
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| Re: A Better God by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:27 AM |
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thats why god has to be a man, he's just to lazy to care
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| Re: Many Thanks by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:35 AM |
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i think "write" in the 2nd to last stanza should be wrote, but then again mabye i'm just reading it from the wrong angle
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| Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:41 AM |
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| Re: Fugitively Speaking by Dovina |
16-Dec-04/9:47 AM |
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i find that sometimes it is very counter-productive to think. well for me thats true almost all the time...-9-
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| Re: Math Poem by Dovina |
26-Dec-04/2:41 PM |
Two and nothing more is the same as one and one.
are you expecting a threesome?
-10- 'caues math kicks ass
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