| Re: Daddy by mishy_lee |
26-Aug-02/12:17 PM |
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your pain comes across, give it time and remember that he love'd you. Make him proud of who your are and who you will be.
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| Re: One wish by mishy_lee |
26-Aug-02/12:10 PM |
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Very simple but expressive, you got your feelings across quit honestly
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| Re: Dare to Dream by Sterling5583 |
12-Aug-02/9:52 PM |
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Huuummm different but I think you got your point across, you may need to give it to the person you were writing about.
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| Re: A Night's Walk By The Brook by ZCatcher |
12-Aug-02/9:43 PM |
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Don't know why but I like it.
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| Re: Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul |
12-Aug-02/9:41 PM |
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| Re: The lonely house by aurora |
29-Jul-02/12:09 AM |
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Don't people make happy poems any more?
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| Re: ever always: by Sapphire |
29-Jul-02/12:01 AM |
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You said it all in just a few words.
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| Re: Love at 4 A.M. by x311 |
22-Jul-02/1:27 AM |
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Ah this is cute. Shows the sentive side,
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| Re: No Shoes 4 me, thanx by bronzeNICKELchik |
22-Jul-02/1:25 AM |
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Took some thinking to put this together, It's very different but I like it
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| Re: 9/11 by TheDevil |
13-Jul-02/11:40 PM |
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This is not worth a comment & you are not even brave enough to put out any information about yourself. Just like those cowards who murder people then hide away. You will be punished, if not in this lifetime in the next. Because even your God is sick of your actions.
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| Re: My seed of life by bdub420 |
13-Jul-02/11:10 PM |
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You captured love. What else is there to say.
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| Re: Waiting by itchiwitch |
13-Jul-02/11:05 PM |
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I really like this! I would like to post it on my website, of course with you name as the composer. Let me know if its ok. You can e-mail me at fire2iceus@yahoo.com Thanks
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| Re: Pleasurable Agony by crims0ngh0st |
13-Jul-02/10:58 PM |
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Sounds like a real good time
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| Re: Midnight by jfackf |
13-Jul-02/10:41 PM |
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Sounds like me Last Friday night:)
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| Re: my cat by itchiwitch |
13-Jul-02/10:24 PM |
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Good start where's the rest?
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| Re: FAILED PRAYER by MEMORIES |
13-Jul-02/9:58 PM |
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This is a real tear jerker but wrote very well. Depressing but good.
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| Re: regrets by kthulah |
13-Jul-02/9:54 PM |
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Don't know why but I really like this. It just hits home I guess. Good job
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| Re: Reflections in a bathroom stall by gandolff25 |
13-Jul-02/9:49 PM |
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Think I've heard it before or something like it but its still funny :)
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| Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros |
9-Jul-02/8:37 PM |
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You need to get out more.
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| Re: Have you ever heard of William Carlost Williams 24 by notule |
9-Jul-02/8:34 PM |
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Bad really bad. She may want to give you away too.
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