Other № 11389

One wish

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

If I had a wish that was to come true the one thing that I'd wish for is to be with you. When I first saw you I thought nothing more but then when I NOTICED you my jaw dropped to the floor. What is it that you do to make me feel this way to want you more and more every single day? I'd do anything and everything as long as it would please you and if you still weren't satisfied I don't know what I'd do. I know this sounds pathetic everything I say but at least now you know how I feel every day.

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[7] Redfin 26-Aug-02/12:10 PM Reply

Very simple but expressive, you got your feelings across quit honestly

[0] poetandknowit 26-Aug-02/3:57 PM Reply

Mishy this is just way too mushy.