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One wish (Other) by mishy_lee
If I had a wish that was to come true the one thing that I'd wish for is to be with you. When I first saw you I thought nothing more but then when I NOTICED you my jaw dropped to the floor. What is it that you do to make me feel this way to want you more and more every single day? I'd do anything and everything as long as it would please you and if you still weren't satisfied I don't know what I'd do. I know this sounds pathetic everything I say but at least now you know how I feel every day.

Up the ladder: Hope
Down the ladder: Something in your eyes!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7635
Posted: August 26, 2002 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 10:00 AM PDT
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[7] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 26-Aug-02/12:10 PM | Reply
Very simple but expressive, you got your feelings across quit honestly
[0] poetandknowit @ 63.232.170.145 | 26-Aug-02/3:57 PM | Reply
Mishy this is just way too mushy.
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