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Free verse № 12287

Something in your eyes!

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

You are a coincidental co-passenger You are an alien stranger No, no, no! Please don't turn your looks away from me There is something in your eyes telling me: In my blood you are a host The horizons of my soul you hold In my dreams you reside Whatever colour, whatever race you may be The burden of whatever fate you may carry There is a secret in your eyes telling me You are a lifetime friend of mine In fantasy, you are my fan In madness, you are my mate In exile, you are my mirror-image. Please, don't turn your looks away There is something in your eyes wishes to say: You have been my age-old friend.

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[n/a] vulcan 31-Aug-02/2:10 AM Reply
beautiful and earnest.7