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Something in your eyes! (Free verse) by kawakurdi
You are a coincidental co-passenger You are an alien stranger No, no, no! Please don't turn your looks away from me There is something in your eyes telling me: In my blood you are a host The horizons of my soul you hold In my dreams you reside Whatever colour, whatever race you may be The burden of whatever fate you may carry There is a secret in your eyes telling me You are a lifetime friend of mine In fantasy, you are my fan In madness, you are my mate In exile, you are my mirror-image. Please, don't turn your looks away There is something in your eyes wishes to say: You have been my age-old friend.

Up the ladder: One wish
Down the ladder: Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7636
Posted: August 30, 2002 1:31 PM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2002 1:31 PM PDT
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[n/a] vulcan @ 80.242.3.166 | 31-Aug-02/2:10 AM | Reply
beautiful and earnest.7
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