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The lonely house (Free verse) by aurora The lonely house consumed her
As she sat alone
The only others were the people
She once knew
She missed everyone
Even though she said she didn't
Loneliness took her over
And she didn't know any thing any more
She thought she was alone
Even though she wasn???t
Soon she would become one of the people she once knew
And she would miss every one even more
Up the ladder:
Aftershock
Down the ladder:
What to do, what to do!
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Posted: July 28, 2002 8:34 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 8:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.713913 Overall Rank: 11940 Comments:
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Redfin @ 66.168.139.251
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29-Jul-02/12:09 AM
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Don't people make happy poems any more?
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