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Aftershock (Free verse) by Voth269
The pain in my heart cannot be beat, I lost my love the one I owe my life to. With that look she let me go, Breaking my heart ever so. Before I knew it everything went black, Deep in meditation I mended what I could Of my heart and soul. But she left an empty space in my heart That only time could hear. I understood her reasoning, Though she wasn't completely correct. She mistakes my shyness As a one sided conversation. I will never forget her love. She will be in my heart forever

Up the ladder: She and He
Down the ladder: The lonely house

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11944
Posted: July 22, 2002 5:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 5:42 PM PDT
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