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Aftershock (Free verse) by Voth269
The pain in my heart cannot be beat,
I lost my love the one I owe my life to.
With that look she let me go,
Breaking my heart ever so.
Before I knew it everything went black,
Deep in meditation I mended what I could
Of my heart and soul.
But she left an empty space in my heart
That only time could hear.
I understood her reasoning,
Though she wasn't completely correct.
She mistakes my shyness
As a one sided conversation.
I will never forget her love.
She will be in my heart forever
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11944
Posted: July 22, 2002 5:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 5:42 PM PDT
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