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She and He (Free verse) by DevilTmptrss
She sat staring out the window engulfed in the storm. He too sat staring out the window hypnotized by the violent crashes of lightning and the terrifying rumbling of thunder. She was thinking. Thinking of life, of love, of him. Rage and anger rushed through him with the power of the devil himself. As the brilliant lightning crashed vigorously across the night sky, a single tear fell from one of her delicate pale blue eyes. He could not stand the war of emotions inside his trembling body any longer. He pulled the trigger.

Up the ladder: the coldest hell
Down the ladder: Aftershock

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11943
Posted: July 21, 2002 12:15 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 12:15 AM PDT
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