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What to do, what to do! (Lyric) by itchiwitch
To buzz or not to buzz To flea or not to flea To fly or not to fly Or to be a bumble bee To see a mantis prey To get a better weta To bug a lady bug or to catch a caterpillar!

Up the ladder: The lonely house
Down the ladder: And Now...

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6
Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11946
Posted: July 29, 2002 5:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 5:58 AM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 13-Aug-02/5:50 AM | Reply
HA HA HA FUCK YOU
[n/a] itchiwitch @ | 29-Aug-02/6:22 PM | Reply
FUCK YOU TOO ARSEHOLE. HA HA HA
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 29-Aug-02/6:27 PM | Reply
No, look. I wasn't laughing at you and then insulting you. I was putting myself in the position of what appears to be your target audience, i.e. someone who finds the poem funny. That's why I said 'HA HA HA'. However, I was unable to sustain the ruse, and the stress of pretending was so great that I said 'FUCK YOU' in order to release the tension. Unfortunately, since you did not realise that, you made a wholly inappropriate response. Good day.
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