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And Now... (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512 Things have changed so much
Last week I was very upset
And now...
I can barely hold in my happiness
It's hard to believe
That we only met a week ago
And now...
You are one of my best friends
I would have never guessed
That we could ever be this close
And now
You mean so much to me
I'm so happy right now
I want to get up and sing
And now
You're the one I want
Up the ladder:
What to do, what to do!
Down the ladder:
Lost
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Posted: August 14, 2002 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 6:29 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.713913 Overall Rank: 11947 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.96
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15-Aug-02/8:22 AM
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This is emotional drool, not poetry. The raging hormones of adolescence belong in the locked diary away from mommy's eyes.
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