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ever always: (Free verse) by Sapphire watch the rumble roll through my head
taste the thunder beneath my
essence
breathe in the heat of infinate quest mine
hear my destiny wash
through my veins
touch me...
Up the ladder:
in the eye of the stone dragon:
Down the ladder:
Pleasurable Agony
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:13 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:13 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.3920865 Overall Rank: 13002 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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don't grok.
try to make yourself something other than a person writing poetry...like a storm cloud or something. Remove the whole "you" part, it will make who you are clearer.
You said it all in just a few words.
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