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ever always: (Free verse) by Sapphire
watch the rumble roll through my head taste the thunder beneath my essence breathe in the heat of infinate quest mine hear my destiny wash through my veins touch me...

Down the ladder: Pleasurable Agony

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3809524
Weighted score: 4.3920865
Overall Rank: 12997
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:13 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:13 AM PST
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[n/a] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
don't grok.
[5]... anonymous @ 138.16.130.2 | 13-May-02/3:06 PM | Reply
try to make yourself something other than a person writing poetry...like a storm cloud or something. Remove the whole "you" part, it will make who you are clearer.
[8] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 29-Jul-02/12:01 AM | Reply
You said it all in just a few words.
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