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ever always: (Free verse) by Sapphire

watch the rumble roll through my head taste the thunder beneath my essence breathe in the heat of infinate quest mine hear my destiny wash through my veins touch me...

anonymous 13-May-02/3:06 PM
try to make yourself something other than a person writing poetry...like a storm cloud or something. Remove the whole "you" part, it will make who you are clearer.




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