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Pleasurable Agony (Free verse) by crims0ngh0st
Pleasurable Agony Biting lusty sinful lips Mounting you raw and ready Thrusts of pleasure fill my limbs Take me, thrill me riding in this fleshy saddle rougher roads ahead... Screaming through the dark bearing down to get you home Passion filled silence awaits Show me, Know me You scream aloud I hear you inside Awakening that sleeping side You take control... I'm feeling anxious burning inside grabbing, biting, tasting, touching hands everywhere restrained and bonded your domination is overwhelming Teach me... The pain and pleasure mingle as one the pure intensity of lust devilishly you grab at me dominating, powerful... Fiercely overpowering my will Make me yours... Fulfill your needs... Act out your wildest fears I'm afraid and willing waiting and wanting I feel you inside sheer painful bliss.

Up the ladder: ever always:
Down the ladder: Bein' Vegan

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3809524
Weighted score: 4.3920865
Overall Rank: 12998
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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Comments:
[5] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
this has a rhythm that I really like, and the thought jumbles are excellent. It hiccoughs a little around "The pain and pleasure mingle as one"
[4]... anonymous @ | 9-Sep-01/4:32 PM | Reply
is it hot in here...?
[3] nrevatehtni @ | 22-Apr-02/11:30 AM | Reply
try reading miller.
[n/a] deleted user @ 206.180.235.33 | 26-Jun-02/1:54 AM | Reply
Reads sort of like a bodice-ripper novel...
[8] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 13-Jul-02/10:58 PM | Reply
Sounds like a real good time
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.178.176.95 | 6-Sep-02/9:04 PM | Reply
The antithesis of erotica. Who needs Keigels, after reading this my vagina squeezed shut.
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