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in the eye of the stone dragon: (Free verse) by Sapphire leathery flap of wing beats against my heart
give to me a halo of stars
circle my head in a crown of sorrow
bleed me of my soul o' harrowed one
bite, and taste bitter of me
are you able?
are you capable?
are you
worthy of want?
breathe in the fire of pained desire
lick my wounds with
your salted tongue
make me feel real while you kill my soul
Up the ladder:
Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum
Down the ladder:
ever always:
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.3920865 Overall Rank: 13001 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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capable stumbles after able ... both by syllable and ... what is the difference twixt cap(able)? Overall, this has a stronger impression on me. Though somehow several lines seem cliche, they all twine together beautifully.
rend that cloth... better a body that's sensitized... i get you, now just turn it into a poem
wow
Moving and raw.
Well this is erotic but the salted tongue thing is too comical.
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