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Love at 4 A.M. (Free verse) by x311
I've known you for a while But I've really just met you I absolutely love your style You make everything seem new Like a little, fragile angel Singing my favorite tune I really wish I could tell What's going on inside of you What should I tell her today? Something like, "I want you to stay"? Driving in my car Or just running down the street I think about you, star And how you're the one I want to keep With you it's crazy You make me go insane My mind can't break free With you flooding my brain Cuddle up next to me -- we'll talk all night Hold my hand -- we'll walk all night Will you stand next to me? What should I tell her today? Something like, "I want you to stay"? What should I tell her today? I think I'll say, "I want you to stay."

Up the ladder: (untitled)
Down the ladder: Just the Way

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.7272727
Weighted score: 3.8636363
Overall Rank: 13455
Posted: July 9, 2002 10:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 10:55 AM PDT
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Comments:
[3] Jill Stockinger @ 209.162.37.68 | 14-Jul-02/2:59 PM | Reply
Too cliched, not very well written.
[8] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 22-Jul-02/1:27 AM | Reply
Ah this is cute. Shows the sentive side,
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