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Love at 4 A.M. (Free verse) by x311

I've known you for a while But I've really just met you I absolutely love your style You make everything seem new Like a little, fragile angel Singing my favorite tune I really wish I could tell What's going on inside of you What should I tell her today? Something like, "I want you to stay"? Driving in my car Or just running down the street I think about you, star And how you're the one I want to keep With you it's crazy You make me go insane My mind can't break free With you flooding my brain Cuddle up next to me -- we'll talk all night Hold my hand -- we'll walk all night Will you stand next to me? What should I tell her today? Something like, "I want you to stay"? What should I tell her today? I think I'll say, "I want you to stay."

Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:59 PM
Too cliched, not very well written.




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